Kelly Wring

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My Reviews

The Fallen Trapeze Artist

(over 2 years ago)

I didn't find anything wrong with the structure of your writing, save for a couple instances where I feel the sentences should have been ... Read More »

Dark Love

(over 2 years ago)

Alright, some revisions. Chapter 1: paragraph 2: Change colon to a comma. Find a way to describe the stars that does not involve "t... Read More »


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    • created 07/04/15

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about 2 years ago Trin Aster said:

Hello, could you please spend one minute and read The Dance and tell me if it is any good. Thank you so much, have a nice day. God bless you. I do swaps! But it has to be of similar length.


over 2 years ago Everest Neverlynn said:

Hey, wanna swap? Please read Red: Asylum (it's on the fifth page) and in return I'll read anything you'd like me too. (please leave honest feedback)

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over 2 years ago Sydney Lacroix said:

Swap? Please read my short story 'In My Head' for the Dysfunctional Family Contest. Comment or review, heart it (If deserved), give an emotion (If deserved). I will do the same and read anything around the same time length. Thanks, and have a nice day!


P.S: If you leave a review, you may only get a comment in return. Sorry. Also, please leave a review or comment on my grammar and spelling, but please still add details on what you thought of my book. And if you tell me you liked the story, please tell me why, I would like to know what I should change/add. *NO ONE LINERS!!!*


over 2 years ago Melanie Camacho said:

Want to swap? Read my book Warrior Trials and tell me on my wall not the book what you want me to read :)

16 year-old Melanie was born into a family of peasants yet she longs to be more. When the Warrior Master Trials start she eagerly jumps at the chance of being a contestant. One wrong move and she fails. Join Megan as she proves wether or not she has what it takes to become a true Warrior Master.

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