Vera Wolf

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    Locked Behind Amethyst Eyes

    by Vera Wolf

    Eliana had always known who she was. The last of an ancient family whose blood magic held formidable power. It made her a target, trapped in a game...

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My Reviews

To Have Wings and Not Fly

(7 days ago)

"do(,) Missy?" "..checked out(,) Jacob, you've..." - strange that he wasn't coughing in the previous chapter. "I was very worried(... Read More »

Collision: Fusion of Worlds

(7 days ago)

Part 2 Glancing over the Prologue again. I did find it much, much stronger. "But there was never just* one master" I like how ... Read More »

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    This group is for figs who want critiques on their writing. So don't join if you don't want any. If you join please criitque!

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3 days ago Mari said:

Hey! I was wondering if you wanted to continue the chapter swaps? If not that's totally okay, just figured I'd ask because your feedback was really helpful (some of the most I've found so far), and I do really need help with my story, but again I totally understand if you don't wanna continue! Thanks!

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5 days ago A.D. Emile {Kyron} said:

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Hi there fellow figgie! Hope you are doing okay :)

Would you please check out my latest piece 'star fades away'?

Here's the link:

http://figment.com/books/1042406-Star-fades-away

I'd love to return the favor by reading anything of equal length! Just leave a comment on my wall mentioning what you want me to read :)

Have a fantastic day!

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7 days ago Mariella Baird said:

Interested in a swap? If so, please read the prologue and chapter one of Jacked In and let me know what you think. I'll return whatever you do, be it review, heart or comment. Thanks!

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7 days ago Lucy Holiday said:

Hey thanks for the insight! I really like the tough critiques that get into the nitty gritty. Everyone telling me things are great all the time doesn't help me improve my writing, so I really appreciate it! Eva's parents aren't Lunatics without reason. They actually lost their first child to a witch and so they've gone over-board with the anti-magic aspect of Eva's life, and sheltering her! Still, good to know it's not solidly built yet, but the parents will be in the next chapter! (More insight from her home-life will probably help with the confusion.)

Also, I'll list out my questions in my last review for you.

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7 days ago Amber A.Goodson said:

Thanks! I have a bit to edit in that chapter don't I? Jacob's coughs can be inconsistent but I don't want to spill anything. The K is a nickname for Kelly, just as M is a nickname for Mira, I'll clarify who's speaking though. The guy was the same one she ran into earlier,I'll try to describe him better. Mira likes to keep her concerns and worries to her self as they usually turn out to be 'nothing' to her, so she doesn't really tell many about it. One of her flaws. Mira was snickering at the ladder joke she made, I;ll make the more clear. Mira is weird. She's very weird at times. Wait until you see the next chapter. Thanks for the feedback! I'll edit these up as soon as possible!

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