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My Reviews

Ned: A One-Act Play

(almost 2 years ago)

My. God. The pure, unadulterated emotion in this piece left me rocked. Grammatically I couldn't see anything wrong, and I can complet... Read More »


(almost 2 years ago)

for a piece I like the simplicity of it, but I agree with the other reviewer, I would like to see more. for a simple piece I think it wou... Read More »


  • New Review

    • 6 members
    • created 01/26/16

    For newcomers and those who don't get enough reviews of their work on this website, as sometimes it is difficult to be noticed as there are a lot of us on here. Where all work is reviewed and noted.

  • Review Crew

    • 84 members
    • created 09/14/11

    Got a great story? Want somebody to read, comment, heart, and review your book? Just comment what book you want us to read, and we'll do it! (Need group members to assist others)

  • Love Without Cause!!

    • 17 members
    • created 09/14/11

    Do you feel like your stories aren't getting the credit and reads they deserve? Well here is the group for you. Your stories will get read guaranteed! I promise. So Join!!!

  • Everyday romance...

    • 54 members
    • created 09/14/11

    Okay, lets just say I'm an action nut and most of my stories have make believe things, but I'm trying out romance... My two starts I think are good so far...

  • Undertale

    • 6 members
    • created 01/14/16

    RP with undertale

Talk to me!


over 1 year ago Zoey NB said:

Hello! I am in the neighborhood looking for some feedback on my newest story Bad Input. As this is for a class assignment due May 5th, I ask that you respond as soon as possible. Anything you have to say is greatly appreciated. (Comment on my profile whatever you’d like me to read.) Thank you for your time, and have a good day.


almost 2 years ago K. Stevens said:

Hi! You commented on my forum post 4 days ago and I never knew about it. So I apologize for that! If you're still interested, you can critique any work that I've got up (although "Dakota" has been reviewed enough times, I think). Anything of yours that you would like me to review? I might not be able to get to it until Tuesday the 16th, but it will definitely be by Tuesday. :)

Why are we in the bath

almost 2 years ago Alex Jones said:

I'm in the middle of writing right now, but I'll be sure to read your other story before I pick up my writing tomorrow, and thanks again for your kind words and advice.

Why are we in the bath

almost 2 years ago Alex Jones said:

I'd just like to thank you for your kind words about my story "Desolation" and I was just wondering weather you think I should write more about before when my story is set or after it's over?


almost 2 years ago Leah Ellis said:

Hey thank you for reviewing my story "perception" ..the reason a lot.. and I mean a lot of my words and phrases are so messed up is because I had originally hand wrote this story, and in order for me to transfer it into word as quick as possible I used Siri on my Iphone, but I did not check properly if it got any of my words right. I'll be fixing them as soon as possible. Again thank you so much for reviewing my story... I'll be happy to review any of yours if you would like.

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