Approximately 11 minutes to read
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over 2 years ago Logan Koertje said:
Awesome story! Really like the back story and chapters used and the names of the town and characters sound kind of familiar
over 2 years ago Katie Miller said:
I think this is a really good start! The syntax is really good, and I can tell this is probably based off a true story. That being said, don't be afraid to add fictional elements into it! Even if you don't remember the dialogue that took place, it still adds character development and really helps with the overall mood of the story. I also think a lot of these cool events could be drug out over probably a couple thousand words each. I think slowing the pacing down would make it feel more like a story and less like a series of events.
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