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[WINNER OF ROUND THREE OF THE 2015 MARCH MATCH-UP] Are these reminders really necessary?
Writing, Paranormal, Flash Fiction
This story made me:
almost 2 years ago Naturesnest said:
Haha! That was a bit unexpected! ^_^ I will definitely keep this lesson for future reference. Sometimes, when you have bloody figures taunting you in your mirror, you just need a new mirror! ^_^ Great job!
over 2 years ago Helix said:
And here we have the definition of anticlimax. XD This was really nice. It kind of reminds me of a prompt I saw on Tumblr once, and I loved the way you carried it out, especially that last line. Good luck in the next round!
over 2 years ago Linda D said:
OH! This is hilarious. I Love it. I can almost imagine your MC rolling her eyes at the over-dramatic mirror.
excellent! Best of Luck.
Just an afterthought. “Dinner with the in-laws tomorrow.” Since you mention the MC drags the blanket along with them, it makes me wonder about the spouse? No mention if the resident demon woke them, or if they’re cold now without the blanket. Instead, what about “Dinner with the (future) in-laws tomorrow.” You have the spare word and that would make more sense. Yet another reason to get a regular mirror and day planner before the MC gets married.