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You woke up to the sound of someone knocking on glass and realized it was coming from your mirror.
Writing, Fantasy, Flash Fiction
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over 2 years ago Linda D said:
Doesn't seem fair that evil twin gets day, while the nicer one gets night. Or so it seems. I'd thought evil would prefer the night.
Great entry. Best of Luck.
over 2 years ago R. E. Durbin said:
Being as I don't know too much about the Zodiac, it took a me a second to get this, but when I did....Holy Cow! What an entry for this prompt. I love it. Really I do. The fact that your MC changes places every other day (is that right?) with her Gemini twin is such a creepy, yet neat idea. Poor girl. DO her parents know, I wonder?
I hope you get into the fourth round with this. Good luck! :D
almost 2 years ago Naturesnest said:
How intriguing! From the very beginning you hook the reader in so well. Your story flows smoothly from one thought to the next and there is plenty of great imagery.
For a 250 word limit, you created a great plot that leaves the reader with much to ponder and imagine. The story doesn't stop at the end. Very well done!