Approximately 2 minutes to read
Short story for the bright places contest(: #BrightPlaces #brightplacescontest
Writing, Short Story
This story made me:
4 months ago Teirnaeoma said:
Hare a person is sharing his feeling and thoughts, he said that I never know my palace in the life so sometime I feel bad and disappointed. If you cannot go anywhere for writing services then buy college essays online , it will help you to do your work by sitting at the home.
over 1 year ago Emily Rose said:
I actually have read that book too so this was really relate able.
over 2 years ago CeceO (On&off) said:
Wonderful quote, lovely read
over 2 years ago Ayman Fatima said:
This was beautifully written. Though I think the last two or three lines have room for improvement.
over 2 years ago Elzie Bleu said:
I love this piece, I feel like it's very easy to relate to as a reader and writer and I think all of your descriptions are lovely :) great job
over 2 years ago Penelope Jenna Hensley said:
This was excellent. Though there are just a few mistakes, this is a great piece. You definitely made this work, even with the word restriction. I loved this probably because I can relate to it so much. I am in the eighth grade and I am publishing a book currently; I've also always been the "odd one out," as you call it. Just read over it and give it a good clincher and hook sentence. You've surely got a chance here.