Millionaires

1 chapter / 250 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

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WINNER of KingDork contest!!! It's based on the song Millionaires by The Script!
Life is about the little moments that are made of gold, not the major ones that rust away with age.

Genres: Writing, Memoir, Short Story

Tags: kingdork memorable life cinderella lights drink laughter drunk love peace of mind joy millionaires kingdorkcontest daily themes

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almost 3 years ago Corri Midulan said:

I really liked the picture you painted of the characters at the beginning of the story, but leaving the reader to envision their perception of who they were. The ending, I thought, was clever since for the entire piece until that point I had thought that it was about reckless and wealthy young people.This piece reminded me a bit of The Great Gatsby since it centered around carefree youth. Congrats on being featured.

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almost 3 years ago Garima Gupta said:

I really love your writing style. I can definitely see why you won. Congrats!

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almost 3 years ago Julia Tannenbaum said:

Hi, Katie-Marie. I really loved your story and the way the writing flowed. You have incredible talent. I was wondering if you'd take the time to check out my own story; A Cutter's Lullaby. If so, thank you so much. If not, all as well. Keep up the great work. You'll go far w/ your writing.

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almost 3 years ago Rae C said:

I liked it, but like a lot of other people, I found that last line confusing. And I also found a few spots where you should have used a comma instead of a period. But other than that, great job! Good luck in the contest!

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almost 3 years ago Angelec said:

i am not patronizing you but this was adorable i really enjoyed it. it did make me smile. i was just wondering about your tense...you start off in first person and third person using words like he and I then you use the word you which switches the tense to second person...just wondering about that and if you meant to. otherwise i did like this story. it was really cute. and well written. :D

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almost 3 years ago Angelec said:

i am not patronizing you but this was adorable i really enjoyed it. it did make me smile. i was just wondering about your tense...you start off in first person and third person using words like he and I then you use the word you which switches the tense to second person...just wondering about that and if you meant to. otherwise i did like this story. it was really cute. and well written. :D

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