The Boy and His Moon

1 chapter / 1445 words

Approximately 7 minutes to read

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**First Prize in Spilling Ink Teen Short Story Contest**

Eight-year-old Lilly drowsily lifts her eyes to the opaque city window of her bedroom to find something that greatly puzzles her little mind. Across the street, in the construction lot, the moon dangles from a crane.

Genres: Writing, Short Story

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over 5 years ago Kris Skater said:

Awwwwww, this was sooooooo cute! I loved it, sooo much!!!!

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about 6 years ago Fearcreep said:

This is really just fantastic. It's got a very dreamy, surreal feel to it, and it's almost unlike anything I've ever read, I must admit. You've got talent for writing, that's for sure ^^ Your visuals were wonderful, and the idea overall was cute and at the same time just intriguing!

I really hope you keep writing stuff like this :)

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about 6 years ago McPiggles said:

So sweet! I really enjoyed reading this. I love your writing style. I was smiling through the entire story. Great job! KEEP WRITING!

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about 6 years ago Leigh said:

You are a phenomenal writer. Wow. After reading two of your pieces I'm ready to devour a book by you. PLEASE, write all the time so I can read your work all the time.

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about 6 years ago Anna Browne said:

"The moon is hanging from a string." That line immediately captured my attention.

"caked with the dust of the city". Beautiful. Brilliant. Magnificent. Fabulous. Extraordinary. Lovely. Intriguing- need I go on?

This is wonderfully written and I really do hope you continue. I am now following you.... so you BETTER continue, or else XD

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about 6 years ago Ryan McLellan, Jr. said:

OH... MY... GOODNESS!!! When I was reading this, I totally forgot who was writing. I KNOW that someday I'm going to see this at a bookstore in the childrens books aisle. SO AMAZING! No other way to describe it...

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