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**Winner of the Mythical World Contest** The Queen of Hearts has yelled 'off with their heads' too many times.
queen of hearts
This story made me:
8 months ago Dorival Oliveira said:
I love this book and recommend desconto super slim x.
over 2 years ago Huda Memon said:
This was amazing! Your description was amazing and I like that she learned her mistake in the end but it was too late. Very well done.☺
almost 3 years ago Heather June said:
Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This title intrigued me, and this is amazing!!!
almost 3 years ago Acelin Clinton said:
It's amazing how you've made this so funny. I loved it.
6 months ago - clara. said:
"There’s no one left to follow your orders but myself . . ."
I think "myself" should be "me".
". . . and saw her husband’s bloody corpse, and the empty stems . . ."
You do not need a comma after "corpse".
"The Queen approached the nearest heart shaped fountain. . ."
"Heart shaped" should be "heart-shaped".
This was an interesting story! I like it. I hope this review helped. :)
over 2 years ago Sheena-kay Graham said:
So creepy and chilling. You did a very good job showing the inner psyche of the queen.