With a Kiss

1 chapter / 616 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read


~Winner of the July Challenge~ “Even death has a heart.”
― Markus Zusak, The Book Thief

Genres: Writing, Flash Fiction, Paranormal

Tags: villian protagonist antagonist death julychallenge contest winner

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over 1 year ago Lady Red said:

I love how you made Death a person, and when you killed off the girl, you showed me that death is inevitable and that what goes around comes right back around. Good job, I hope you continue this!

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almost 2 years ago ScarlettFyre said:

I really enjoyed this. Death is such an interesting figure and I always love reading stories that explore him (or her, I suppose). It's part of why I enjoyed The Book Thief so much. That and the fact that I just love an eccentric narrator.

Anyway, back on topic. The descriptions were amazing and you set the scene so perfectly. I also loved the way you suggested at the torture rather than described it. It worked a lot better than if you had described it in detail- then you run the risk of either making it too tame, or shocking the reader so much it isn't creepy anymore.

Anyway, well done on an amazing story!

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