As Sky Lay Dying

1 chapter / 707 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

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July Challenge Winner

Poetry is a mirror which makes beautiful that which is distorted.
-Percy Shelley

Genres: Writing, Poetry

Tags: julychallenge earth sky heaven hell poetry drama vast life death love

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about 1 month ago Night Rider said:

I cried. I cant say anymore than I cried

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about 1 year ago Becca Fox said:

This is incredible! Truly a work of art! Thanks for sharing!

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over 1 year ago Kimberly Quill said:

I come back to read this again every once in a while. I've said it before and I'll say it again: This piece is amazing.

And the title is pretty boss too.

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over 2 years ago Londyn Free said:

I totally agree with Riley

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4 months ago Sky Lark said:

THIS story is fantastically captivating with the rhyming with the battle, everything. I could see everything unfold in my head and I have to say it was beautiful. You did a very good job

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over 1 year ago Joshua Troy Sulentic said:

The rhyme scheme is well mended with the figurative language and creative writing to create a beautiful poem about the war between Heaven and Earth waged by Hell, and to show that the Good will always conquer the Evil, even in times of despair or trial.

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