Approximately half a minute to read
Something horrible happened in the past and she can never forget it.
(Cover art- Google images)
This story made me:
about 2 years ago Kathy said:
Sad but impressive.
about 2 years ago Kylee-Ann Witzke said:
another amazing Karina Original =]
about 2 years ago Karina said:
@Ali- thanks!! :)
@Hannah- thankfully not. :) But I know it does happen to some people. :(
about 2 years ago Hannah Ellery-Ashby said:
Did this really happen to you?
about 1 year ago Tina Jameson said:
Beautifully written. I also love the cover and the description really summarizes this perfectly.
This is a situation that I have never personally been subjected to, but I know lots of people that have, and I want to congratulate you on taking such a painful situation and portraying it in a way that touched even me, someone who has never been through this. I could almost feel the pain the narrator was feeling.
One suggestion: the sentence "You got all your anger out on me and you made me cry" just sounds a little awkward to me. I think it would sound better if you substituted "got" with "took". "You took all your anger out on me" would flow much better.