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Snoopy

By Karina

Description:

Something horrible happened in the past and she can never forget it.

(Cover art- Google images)

Genres: Writing, Poetry

Tags: poem poetry mom died dad abused note new forgetting memories

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Salem human form

about 2 years ago Kathy said:

Sad but impressive.

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about 2 years ago Kylee-Ann Witzke said:

another amazing Karina Original =]

Snoopy

about 2 years ago Karina said:

@Ali- thanks!! :) @Hannah- thankfully not. :) But I know it does happen to some people. :(

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about 2 years ago Hannah Ellery-Ashby said:

Did this really happen to you?

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about 1 year ago Tina Jameson said:

Beautifully written. I also love the cover and the description really summarizes this perfectly.

This is a situation that I have never personally been subjected to, but I know lots of people that have, and I want to congratulate you on taking such a painful situation and portraying it in a way that touched even me, someone who has never been through this. I could almost feel the pain the narrator was feeling.

One suggestion: the sentence "You got all your anger out on me and you made me cry" just sounds a little awkward to me. I think it would sound better if you substituted "got" with "took". "You took all your anger out on me" would flow much better.

Great work.