Approximately half a minute to read
Writing, Poetry, Non-Fiction
vitamin d deficiency
This story made me:
almost 5 years ago Aj Finch said:
Wow, very personal and well written, sort of melancholy. Please do your end of the swap now and tell me if you need anything else!
almost 5 years ago xi the conquerer said:
ikr?!?!?! i hate it when i don't get to mah prozac.
please read my story lettters to bella!
almost 5 years ago GailNite said:
In some places is sounded choppy, but on purpose like you wanted the reader to pause there fora moment. I liked the overall effect, and the way this comes straight from the heart.
almost 5 years ago Dorothy said:
I love how honest this is. I really enjoy your writing. Try capitalizing the i's and some places don't flow as well as you might think. Reading it aloud helps. Otherwise, amazing job!
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