Approximately 2 minutes to read
Marina just can't seem to get a break in life. She tries to take her life in her own hands, but she learns that she's not as alone as she thinks.
Drama, Romance, Flash Fiction
This story made me:
almost 5 years ago Secret Author said:
Read and hearted =]. I'm a newbie so I've just been getting back on commenting to follow-up on previously read entries. If you would, please check out "Straightaway" on my page and if you like it, heart it! If not, well that's okay. haha =]
about 5 years ago Courtney Smith said:
I really enjoyed this story, nice work. Good luck in the contest and thank you for the comment on my story :)
about 5 years ago Nikki Cee said:
This was a really realistic and relatable story. Keep up the great work! :)
about 5 years ago Sydney Doughty said:
amazing, a lot of people can relate to this.
about 5 years ago Monica Tlachac said:
You have a nice story with a happy ending. It would fit better into a much longer word length, unfortunatly. I know you have the contest, however, so good job trying to make it fit within the word limit. The ending felt really rushed, but, again, we can blame that on the word limit. The only editing advice that I really think you should do is to watch capitalization. You had a few randome things that weren't capitalized and "good" that started a sentence wasn't. Keep writing. You have a strong voice/style
about 5 years ago Nganga Naima said:
Great job. really inspiring. I loved your details and creation of imagery. This is relatable to many people:)