Approximately 2 minutes to read
My entry for the Phone Contest. Hopefully you all like it! It's my first contest entry, so hearts and critiques are very appreciated!
Drama, Mystery, Short Story
This story made me:
over 5 years ago Mariela Pichardo said:
Wow! This was a gripping short story. I really hope to read more in the near future. I like what I've read so far. Great job!
over 5 years ago Black Roses Await said:
wow that was cool, but i didn't really understand it, what was the plot?
almost 6 years ago imfromneptune (STEVE) said:
almost 7 years ago Natasha Thomas said:
Amazing writing. i loved it. it leaves you questioning and on your toes. it also really sucks you in and leaves you wtih a lot of questions. i want to read more!
almost 6 years ago Samantha Woo said:
Wow, that was one fantastic story! In those few sentences, you captured a suspenseful scheme and kept many readers' attention as I can see. There's usually a good way and a bad way to leave a story hanging on a cliff, and you are really good at ending on a cliffhanger without people saying things like "you ended to soon." You ended PERFECTLY! I absolutely LOVED it! Good luck on your contest too! I have confidence in you! :)
almost 7 years ago Anna Browne said:
Maybe check out some of my work? My current novel is The Vamp Tramp and I need all the critiques I can get! It's my first well-discriptive novel and am having trouble with making the beginning interesting. Thanks!