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Thank you for all the kind comments...makes me feel like 'me' is more interesting than I'd thought ^.~
Writing, Biography, Poetry
This story made me:
over 4 years ago SAMRIDDHSINGHTHAKUR said:
please tell how did i do..?
over 5 years ago The Toasted Table said:
this is amazing. WOW. it flows so nicely and it really sticks with you.. your writing is beautiful. wonderful imagery. :)
over 5 years ago Abbey Evans said:
You're reaaallyy good at writing! All I gotta say, haha.!
over 6 years ago Emma Fisher said:
That was very pretty. I really liked it.
over 6 years ago delaney raynes said:
i really like this!
i like the way the lines are short - it makes it feel more frantic, like the narrator is gasping inbetween breaths. or at least, it does to me; i don't know if that's what you were going for XD
your imagery is interesting, i love the little details you've put into it, the details that seem to define what makes you uniquely 'you'~