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Write a Review7 months ago Scarlett Symphony said:
Okay! This was a wonderful short-story and I'd love it, as would everyone else who has read it, if you turned it into an actual book, so that maybe in the end Anika would get her power and it'd be greater than everyone else's.
9 months ago Jaelee said:
I really hope you will continue this.
I noticed a few mistakes here and there with grammar. And I think the first sentence should be "Anika cracked open her eyes and stares at her alarm clock." There was also something I noticed with her mother smiling at her, I think you left off a "the" or "her" but I didn't note it so I can't properly recall.
Otherwise the idea was really cool. I thought of Sky High at first, but I'm glad that Anika didn't suddenly get her powers during the Energy blast demonstration. You made a unique and strong character. I'd love to see this expanded too. It's a really neat idea. Great job. :)
8 months ago Skye Ryder said:
love the title!
9 months ago Halima said:
Ha very cute title! Love it! anyway your story was super adorable, I really enjoyed this piece!
9 months ago Brooke Wright said:
In my opinion you should've gotten first. I really liked this and you should continue it!
9 months ago S. E. Spradlin 龙思文 said:
Congrats on 3rd!!!! You totally deserved it!!!!!! :D