The Dream Every Girl Wants

1 chapter / 187 words

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© Copyright. Every girl wants to find that dream guy that will say the nicest things to her.

Genres: Writing, Poetry

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over 5 years ago Kandeeisnotbeingatroll. said:

this is really cute. really well written but you had one mistake comparing it to me [,] well ofcourse, my favorite line was; "the sun is shining brighter, as if to compete with me" great job.


over 5 years ago Ally Paige Sherwin said:

This is my favorite poem of yours, it has a lovely flow to it and I loved the sun comparison- great job! Very beautiful.


over 5 years ago Jinjin Tiger said:

awww, sweet! If you compose music you should make this into a song.


over 5 years ago Dreamerofbooks said:

I loved this. It's very true too. You are a very talented writer. keep it up! who knows? maybe I'll see your work in a bookstore someday. :D

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over 5 years ago acrosstheuniverse1211 said:

I can't really criticize you on much, can I? This was amazing! I wanted to be the girl in your poem!!! I loved how you compared her to the sun!!


over 5 years ago Penelope Tara said:

Very very good! Relates so muh to my life right now! Beautifully written!

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