Approximately about 1 hour to read
What would you do if being normal was only a distant memory? If all you knew now was horror and fear?
*`* = change in point of view/ perspective
`~` = change in time -- same perspective
Writing, Fantasy, Mystery
This story made me:
about 3 years ago Morgan Allen said:
This is really great and well put together! The only mistake i saw was in Chapter One, toward the end practice was misspelled. But honestly can't wait to read more.:)
about 3 years ago Sovereign Lights said:
I REALLY like this! I came here saying, "Okay, I'll just read a chapter." And before I knew it, I had read 30 minutes worth of your book! (good thing we don't do much in Bio!) Your characters are very cool, but I might also be happy that you have a character with the same name as one of my best friends (Josh). I would like to know what your characters look like, because I didn't read much in appearances. Your writing flows very nicely, but the transitions between times is a little confusing. I didn't see any technical issues. This is very interesting! Expect me to finish! Heart/ reactions deserved! :)
about 3 years ago Stefan Zappia said:
Very interesting plot and characters! Well done! As part of our swap, could you read "Howard Phillips and the Nightmare Crown" and tell me what you think?
about 3 years ago Sydney Madison said:
This is really good! I like the idea of mind reading, it's really unique! I also like the main character and your descriptions were... well, descriptive.
Thanks for the swap!
over 5 years ago Sade Harlem said:
Very good! I liked your descriptions and the way that the narrators's voice sounds realistic, although I felt that it was a bit rushed and in some parts forced. Other than that, it was a grearead and I like the title and cover. It looks like a place in the mountains where I could have gone.
over 5 years ago Emilia McGrath said:
I absolutely LOVE the descriptions in this! I loved the narrator's voice, she actually sounds realistic.
A few bits were a bit rushed and it felt like the sentences were ramming into each other, but apart from that this is going to turn into one hell of a story!