Approximately half a minute to read
A quick poem I wrote, inspired by someone's story about what they did last night that I eavesdropped in on. Thank you delinquents.
This story made me:
over 1 year ago Meagan Elizabeth said:
this is really well written, its wonderful! (:
over 1 year ago Nilanjana Pati said:
This is powerful and inspiring. Great job.
over 1 year ago Kate Brashear said:
I really like this poem! The best thing about it is its feel. Just reading it, even ignoring the meaning of the words, you get such a strong feeling - not even sure what feeling, but poems that inspire feeling are doing well.
over 1 year ago Lady Foscari said:
Poignant, chilling, haunting, and vivid. I loved this. Great job.
6 months ago Tialyn Eakman said:
Great idea! Love the symbolism and the voice. Nice job
over 1 year ago Desarm said:
Loved the ending,
was so eh, how to say it, i can't say it how it was, but it was great (:
the lack of puntuation was a positive characteristic, they flow was good