Sadness

1 chapter / 90 words

Approximately half a minute to read

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Genres: Writing, Poetry

Tags: reality sad

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over 6 years ago Em Kam said:

i would tell you its amazing, but you probably already know that...

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about 7 years ago Anna M. Watson said:

So very sad. The imagery was really good. I liked the whole tissues on the floor thing a lot.

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about 7 years ago Fish Fingers and Custard said:

This was very nice. I liked your rhythm, of the one word, usually a noun, then the two longer sentences. It flowed very well. Also, they imagery had me picturing an actual room, so you get an A+ on realistic-ness.

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about 7 years ago Robert Cullerton said:

Sad but great.nice job

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about 7 years ago Nicole Bender said:

This reminds me of the few times I've been truly depressed... and how I lived through it. It made me shiver. It's a good poem, full of heart, and emotion.

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