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This story made me:
over 6 years ago Em Kam said:
i would tell you its amazing, but you probably already know that...
about 7 years ago Anna M. Watson said:
So very sad. The imagery was really good. I liked the whole tissues on the floor thing a lot.
about 7 years ago Fish Fingers and Custard said:
This was very nice. I liked your rhythm, of the one word, usually a noun, then the two longer sentences. It flowed very well. Also, they imagery had me picturing an actual room, so you get an A+ on realistic-ness.
about 7 years ago Robert Cullerton said:
Sad but great.nice job
almost 7 years ago XxxSuzyQtyxxX said:
That is amazing! you totally captured the element of sadness! I heart it
about 7 years ago Etho Mack said:
what a wonderful poem, but it's a little bit odd when I read this line:
"Hiding the sound of my tears"
I don't know that tears have sound or you're referring to cry? well I love it anyway. :)