Approximately 3 minutes to read
**Not Finished.. ; Story of a teenage Muslimah, whos father and two brothers died in 9/11. Nora must stay strong, and not let her little sister see her weakness when trying to battle the hatred she has been facing.
Drama, Religious, Short Story
new york city
This story made me:
over 5 years ago T.X.Jaine said:
This is really awesome. Its so tru, there is so much hatred and desrcimination in the world and it kills people on the inside more than any terrorist group of genocide could ever kill. It's sad. Im a huge supporter of Religious, Cultural, and racial tolerance. Keep writing, spread the word!
over 5 years ago Nicole said:
"But a wish will never become a reality" that last line gave me the shivers. It summed up the whole story wonderfully. I really like the POV of this story, it gives a whole new meaning to 9/11. I hope you do continue with this!
over 5 years ago Blazin'Andy said:
I hadn't read any 9/11 stories before, simply because I don't have a strong connection to that event. All I truly know, is that it's caused America a great deal of sorrow. Your take on it is interesting. I'm def. amazed of this POV. Keep Writing!
over 5 years ago C.P. Patterson said:
This is written really well, and you chose to talk about something that happens all the time, all over the world. You gave the main character a good voice, and I really want to read more. There were a few gramatical errors, but nothing huge. Good job.
over 5 years ago Jordan Rosner said:
I like your story idea. It's interesting.
But this needs some serious editing.
There are run-on sentences, miss-use of commas, and sentences and phrases that just sound awkward.
I'd be more than happy to edit this for you, if you'd like.
Like I said, good story idea, but it needs to be edited.