The Girl With the Flower Umbrella

3 chapters / 9756 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read


Delilah has been living in the asylum for a total of eight years - her trial for murder has altogether disappeared, and the police don't know what to do with her. She seems normal, but then again, they all do. She's just gotten over the murder of her friends she claimed to have been committed by a young girl with a flower umbrella, when everything comes full circle. As it always must.

Genres: Paranormal, Adventure, Novel

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almost 6 years ago Maddy Sanchez said:


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almost 6 years ago Megan G said:

This is awesome! I love your character's voice, it keeps you reading, and the plot is very interesting. You had some really great figurative language in there too, like the sentence about paranoia. Amazing job! :)


about 6 years ago Evaline Age said:

Fascinating idea, really captivating :) I read the first chapter, which really should have been like five chapters. Maybe split it up from when she kills her friends to when she's in the asylum to when she's talking with Trinity afterwards. And I wish you would spend more time describing things- they seem to pass by so fast, and they're such good ideas!


about 6 years ago Rachael Cowley said:

Very interesting. I just found the beginning to be a little hard to follow at times but all in all great job!!!

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