over 1 year ago Alas Mya Nishels said:

This is a very well written story! It's one of those ones where you wish it won't ever end!

over 1 year ago Sam Gem said:

I really, really liked this story and will keep reading if you ever decide to continue with it. You have such great imagination and writing skills. I love the idea of the story and the character of the boy in the mask. The begining was very creative, having him fall down an organ pipe. Great job!

over 1 year ago JailHouseRock said:

That was soooo cool! I want to read more!

over 1 year ago Ellie Shayna said:

This was amazing, interesting and really well-written. This is going to be a short comment, because I saw absoluetely nothing wrong. Please, please add more! (By the way, this sort of reminded me of Howl's Moving Castle. Did you get inspiration from there, or am I just crazy?)