This is such a unique retelling of a great poem! Have you heard Loreena McKennitt's song adaption of it, by chance?
I would suggest that you mention the blond-haired boy a bit earlier, because it feels a little random having him thrown in at the end. Otherwise, really nice!
about 1 year ago Millie Moses said:
This is such a unique retelling of a great poem! Have you heard Loreena McKennitt's song adaption of it, by chance?
I would suggest that you mention the blond-haired boy a bit earlier, because it feels a little random having him thrown in at the end. Otherwise, really nice!
over 1 year ago Jay Bird said:
I love this piece its very diffrent! Great work!
over 1 year ago Saffron Hickey said:
This is one of my favourite poems - what a great topic to choose! I loved your work.