Ripples

1 chapter / 107 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

It can save. It can kill. It can destroy. It can change what's seen.

Genres: Writing, Poetry

Tags: water ripples poetry poem about water

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over 3 years ago Sydney Moore said:

Great job, beautiful poem

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over 5 years ago Issa Trinidad said:

It's interesting the way you talked about water in this :). I liked how it used a nursery rhyme pattern but didn't sound too childish or singsong. Nice job!

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almost 6 years ago Lila Malfoy Black said:

It was awesome, beautiful, and so true. :)

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about 6 years ago Natalie the Ninja said:

Thought provoking. I thought about this for a few minutes after reading. Hmmmmmm. :-D

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about 6 years ago Anna Browne said:

These are very strong, and powerful words you have. Although it seems a little cheesy, it is fun and yet sad enough to keep holding the reader's attention.

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about 6 years ago Emilee Monin said:

Wow that was amazing !! you explained the mysteries of waters strange ways. But i feel like it needs more emotions in it more feeling !!!!!!!!!!

~ Emily M.

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